Some Editing Thoughts

So, I have been thinking about my Adventure in Zeppler story. I think it probably needs a bit of adding to various conversations to make Alfred and Bigitte's decision make sense. Frederika probably has a few words about when you can consider a child fully grown. There might be a few comments to insert, and, of course, it could probably use another pass for grammar and, you know, word stuff. I was thinking of buying a cover from one company- it has a castle and girl in a hood, but she's a redhead. It's $54, but it should be redone to make the girl a brunette. Maybe add a cart.

Anyway,

The cat is being stubborn. I need to remember to not give treats. I'll get Royal Canin or something. I'll do the editing in December.